Pet Shop Revolution by tightwhitepants, literature
Literature
Pet Shop Revolution
Pet Shop Revolution - 1st draft
There are spitting kittens
there are dogs that fight
there are fish that snarl and birds that bite.
There are canaries
with contrary manners;
Jack Russells with muscles
like bags of spanners.
There are hamsters
that you keep in a cage
full of hatred and hamster rage.
There are cynical guinea pigs
with squinting eyes
that scheme and dream of your demise.
There are budgerigars that bear a grudge
curmudgeonly birds the glare and judge
from their poisoned perches of prejudice
while down on the floor the dormice hiss
of the day when the pet shop unifies
and all the pissed-off pets will rise
with
Its my only vice,
she said with a grin
I dont want your advice
just you, and the gin.
I dont care a jot youll
say my lifes gone astray
just share that bottle
of sweet chardonnay,
and Ill be the fire
alive in your hearth
your heart, your desire
the salt of your earth.
I wont pour out my troubles
how they came to pass,
just pour me a double
and pass me that glass.
I wont weep on your shoulder
wont burden your heart
Ill be your boulder -
I wont break apart
when skies start to thunder,
through the rain and the snows
well never go under
while the whisk
At your soirée, beneath the trees
you served those funny canapés
of broccoli and garden peas
asparagus and salsify
in creme de menthe at double strength
and garnished thick with cabbage fly.
At breakfast now sweet baby leeks
pea green and will for days and weeks.
It was a butchered day in April, the day you were born, beneath
a sky of bloody swabs and bruises limping in from the East, I remember it
as being a cold stone baptismal day your mother screamed you into, the pain
bunching her face and your fathers fists white-knuckled and tattooed blue
loose at his side as he paced the ground and stamped
but the earth would not swallow.
On your fourth birthday they gave you a kite, and the gusts
the first time you flew it ripped it from your hand
and pinned it to the twigs (bare and cauldron-harsh they were) of a creaking lime
its lopsided tail etching a woeful grin in a face foolishly
half-f
She can't abide hawkers, my mother-in-law,
so she's placed a stern notice upon her front door
that states bold and bluntly to visitors who call:
"No Salesmen, no Hucksters, no Peddlers at all!"
Neatly coiffured, and on their best behaviour,
young men clutching brochures about Jesus - Our Saviour;
old gypsy grandmas selling posies of flowers
that they swear, through cracked teeth, possess curative powers
These things make her cross, but there's something that irks her more:
when her front door won't open up because of the circulars
shoved through her letterbox by a bored paper boy -
"Loo's Cleared! There's No Job Too Small - Just Te
Youre a half-penny thought in the back of my mind,
just a whimsy, a waste of a fragment of time.
Youre a telephone number I forgot to write down;
youre the least of my worries, the last in a line
of a long list of wishes Ive wished for.
Yes, your voice is a song that I hum now and then,
not for long, just for fun, never starting again
round and round in my head, nowhere near my top ten,
this refrain wont remain, when its over - Amen
just a tune that I once mightve danced to.
Youre a memory, fading, a faraway sound
hardly there, barely heard, just a wisp on the wind
like a melody play
Pet Shop Revolution by tightwhitepants, literature
Literature
Pet Shop Revolution
Pet Shop Revolution - 1st draft
There are spitting kittens
there are dogs that fight
there are fish that snarl and birds that bite.
There are canaries
with contrary manners;
Jack Russells with muscles
like bags of spanners.
There are hamsters
that you keep in a cage
full of hatred and hamster rage.
There are cynical guinea pigs
with squinting eyes
that scheme and dream of your demise.
There are budgerigars that bear a grudge
curmudgeonly birds the glare and judge
from their poisoned perches of prejudice
while down on the floor the dormice hiss
of the day when the pet shop unifies
and all the pissed-off pets will rise
with
Its my only vice,
she said with a grin
I dont want your advice
just you, and the gin.
I dont care a jot youll
say my lifes gone astray
just share that bottle
of sweet chardonnay,
and Ill be the fire
alive in your hearth
your heart, your desire
the salt of your earth.
I wont pour out my troubles
how they came to pass,
just pour me a double
and pass me that glass.
I wont weep on your shoulder
wont burden your heart
Ill be your boulder -
I wont break apart
when skies start to thunder,
through the rain and the snows
well never go under
while the whisk
At your soirée, beneath the trees
you served those funny canapés
of broccoli and garden peas
asparagus and salsify
in creme de menthe at double strength
and garnished thick with cabbage fly.
At breakfast now sweet baby leeks
pea green and will for days and weeks.
It was a butchered day in April, the day you were born, beneath
a sky of bloody swabs and bruises limping in from the East, I remember it
as being a cold stone baptismal day your mother screamed you into, the pain
bunching her face and your fathers fists white-knuckled and tattooed blue
loose at his side as he paced the ground and stamped
but the earth would not swallow.
On your fourth birthday they gave you a kite, and the gusts
the first time you flew it ripped it from your hand
and pinned it to the twigs (bare and cauldron-harsh they were) of a creaking lime
its lopsided tail etching a woeful grin in a face foolishly
half-f
She can't abide hawkers, my mother-in-law,
so she's placed a stern notice upon her front door
that states bold and bluntly to visitors who call:
"No Salesmen, no Hucksters, no Peddlers at all!"
Neatly coiffured, and on their best behaviour,
young men clutching brochures about Jesus - Our Saviour;
old gypsy grandmas selling posies of flowers
that they swear, through cracked teeth, possess curative powers
These things make her cross, but there's something that irks her more:
when her front door won't open up because of the circulars
shoved through her letterbox by a bored paper boy -
"Loo's Cleared! There's No Job Too Small - Just Te
Youre a half-penny thought in the back of my mind,
just a whimsy, a waste of a fragment of time.
Youre a telephone number I forgot to write down;
youre the least of my worries, the last in a line
of a long list of wishes Ive wished for.
Yes, your voice is a song that I hum now and then,
not for long, just for fun, never starting again
round and round in my head, nowhere near my top ten,
this refrain wont remain, when its over - Amen
just a tune that I once mightve danced to.
Youre a memory, fading, a faraway sound
hardly there, barely heard, just a wisp on the wind
like a melody play
shall we tango, feel the tingle
as spring rainfalls rinse our ankles
and the sprinkles and the splashes
and the shrieks as sudden dashes
through these happy april puddles
bring me underneath the rainbow-
centred raindrops as they tremble
emerald sparkle-edged and dancing
on the tips of your eyelashes
Youre a half-penny thought in the back of my mind,
just a whimsy, a waste of a fragment of time.
Youre a telephone number I forgot to write down;
youre the least of my worries, the last in a line
of a long list of wishes Ive wished for.
Yes, your voice is a song that I hum now and then,
not for long, just for fun, never starting again
round and round in my head, nowhere near my top ten,
this refrain wont remain, when its over - Amen
just a tune that I once mightve danced to.
Youre a memory, fading, a faraway sound
hardly there, barely heard, just a wisp on the wind
like a melody play
Love Song for Dagmar by tightwhitepants, literature
Literature
Love Song for Dagmar
Shes a glutton, shes no kitten; she can stuff her face for Britain
See her sitting in her Citroen, you can spot her from afar.
She is buxom, she is brazen, see her bottom, its amazing,
She is straining at the straplets of her cantilevered bra.
Shes an airship, shes a trawler, still I worship and adore her
Shes a randy landslide riding in her flash French car.
As a goddess, shes the oddest, and shes vulgar and immodest
Shes the empress of breast, she is my sweet Dagmar.
Shes no figment, shes no fragment, shes a fat fridge magnet
and shes sticking like a limp
I saw you from my ambulance,
dismissed you as hallucination
brought on by drugs and abstinence.
But something stirred me from my trance -
a certain raddled radiance
a spittle-spotted elegance
that won my admiration.
Escorted to my padded cell
they took my belt and both shoe laces.
What saved me from this lonely hell -
suppressed, oppressed by Seroquel
I heard your voice and smelled your smell,
I thought that you were there as well,
at rest in my embraces.
And from that day we sealed our tryst -
Wed live with total dedication.
Id be your psycho Therapist,
and never let you slit your wrists;
(Ill tie you up
We met across the internet, and words were our caresses;
these emails were my fingers which I fumbled to undress us.
Each r-o-t-f-l we sent was magical and precious,
but even love like this will have its pitfalls and its stresses.
When I wrote to her to say I needed my space for a spell,
she answered with four-letter words no, she didnt take it well.
I thought I was in heaven, now Ive found myself in Hell
since she dipped her poison pen into our loves ink well.
Now Im sending this sad postcard home to poppa and to momma
with a heart that is as heavy as an old Lancaster bomber.
She handed me a full stop
Counting for Nothing by tightwhitepants, literature
Literature
Counting for Nothing
Fourteen hundred paces wasted
walking to your door,
and every time a pointless pounding
headache - sore, resounding, raw;
what follows next? as you'd expect
a shocking exhibition of
that bloody mix of tears
and spit and semen spilled
across this gritty floor.
and from the day that we last spoke
I've counted twenty-four.
How come I'm your ignored -
you must have grown so bored of me
and now my fingers, gnawed and nails all bitten
paw through scores
of letters better left unwritten -
never sent, now torn and scattered, littered
with my bitter thoughts unuttered,
so utterly distraught I am, I poured a litany of scorn
and lo
Love Song for Dagmar by tightwhitepants, literature
Literature
Love Song for Dagmar
Shes a glutton, shes no kitten; she can stuff her face for Britain
See her sitting in her Citroen, you can spot her from afar.
She is buxom, she is brazen, see her bottom, its amazing,
She is straining at the straplets of her cantilevered bra.
Shes an airship, shes a trawler, still I worship and adore her
Shes a randy landslide riding in her flash French car.
As a goddess, shes the oddest, and shes vulgar and immodest
Shes the empress of breast, she is my sweet Dagmar.
Shes no figment, shes no fragment, shes a fat fridge magnet
and shes sticking like a limp
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I uploaded a poem today - now I know it's not 'Dulce et Decorum', it's not the fucking 'Kubla Khan', it's just a bit of doggerel that nobody much will read in a few weeks time, I'm under no illusions about that - but already after a couple of hours it has been downloaded two times. Now what's that all about? Whoever downloaded it sure as heck didn't leave a comment, not even a smiley, nada, nothing at all. salshep (https://www.deviantart.com/salshep) and Adeimantus (https://www.deviantart.com/adeimantus) both kindly gave this piece a :+fav: - (thanks to you guys excellent taste as always) - but much as I'd like to believe it, I don't think eit