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my evolution as a fukyu poet by ~tightwhitepants:icontightwhitepants:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Humor > Fixed


twp's early emo fukyu period

my strangled heart beats
seventeen dull syllables
in the hollowness.


twp first tastes fukyu success

I suck, my pencil
nib scribbles one dull thought and
look how smug I am


twp experiences fukyu block

my dumb pencil lead
dumps shit across the page like
a clumsy plumber


the world tells twp fukyu

less is more I’m sure
but the less I write the more
they head for the door


twp's fukyu epiphany

if you can’t be arsed
writing a complete poem
compose a haiku
©2007-2009 ~tightwhitepants
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=salshep Dec 5, 2007, 9:10:06 AM
the pants are back!

<3

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~tightwhitepants Dec 6, 2007, 5:35:53 AM
as white as ever (discounting the odd smear of sun lotion)
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~Sevyn Dec 6, 2007, 8:56:40 AM
The fukyu block cracked me up big time. (Oh, how mature I am.)
Terribly amusing and admirable, as always. Your work always makes me smile.
:icontightwhitepants:
~tightwhitepants Dec 10, 2007, 5:22:07 AM
Always glad to have spread a little happiness. Thanks for commenting.
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~sarahmm Jan 2, 2008, 6:22:13 PM
Lmao.. Nice, I love it. Very clever of you (especially the ending :P)

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Sarah!!
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`lovetodeviate Jan 4, 2008, 5:04:18 AM
Congratulations on the win. This was great to read. :)

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~tightwhitepants Jan 4, 2008, 9:04:43 AM
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I see you're organising a competition encouraging good critique. Your journal discusses at some length the logistics of prizes and prize giving, but doesn't say too much about the competition itself. Tell me some more - I may be able to offer something, but I'd like to know what I'd be rewarding.

Thanks again for the +fav, Aditi. May I call you Aditi? You can call me Lawrence.
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`lovetodeviate Jan 4, 2008, 9:13:50 AM
I'll note you with some information.

Sure, call me Aditi, and I shall call you Lawrence. :)

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~lpowell Jan 4, 2008, 12:30:20 PM
Pretty damn good. Congrats on the win, you certainly deserve it. :)
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